Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts

Friday, March 2, 2018

Week 7 Story Planning: The Midnight Ambush

I decided to try something different this week and write a planning post. I have not done this before, and I thought it would be cool to research a story topic more in depth. I have a lot of cool ideas for story writing next week. However, I decided to just stick with one idea and run with it for now. It could change next week.

The attack of the Pandavan camp came as a real surprise to me the first time that I read the story. I was not expecting something of this nature to occur because I was certain that the Pandavan's would not experience an act as egregious as this. It was a cowardly attack that took place in the dead of the night while the Pandavan camp was asleep. This definitely took me back to the time Rama ambushed a foe to reclaim the monkey kingdom. The circumstances, of course, were definitely different. However, I think the act was done so in a very shady and cowardly manner. It did not come as a shock to me later when Ashwatthama was later forced to give up his gem. I knew that he would get what was coming to him in due time. I noticed that the actual combat is not described in the story at all. There might not be much combat to begin with. However, I would like to expand upon what is already there. I also noticed that this attack has a lot of impact on the future. I think I should touch on just how impactful the acts Ashwatthama committed were. I decided to expand my knowledge on Ashwatthama, so I did some research.

I used Wikipedia as my main source. Ashwatthama is actually considered to be an avatar of one of the Rudras. He is also an avatar of the Chiranjivi. It is interesting to note just how powerful the gem in his head was. It gave Ashwatthama the power over many different kinds of beings except humans. This gem protected him from a lot of earthly desires and necessities like thirst. What I found most interesting is that Ashwatthama is considered to be like Shiva himself. He has the ability to hone his strengths and become a Shiva like being while in battle. So, it is almost impossible to  defeat him while he is enraged and in battle. I also did some research on the Narayanastra. This is the weapon this Ashwatthama uses to defeat the Pandavan forces. It is actually the weapon belonging to Vishnu while he is in another form. It is such a powerful weapon that it brings about total destruction or the target surrenders. I think it would be cool to incorporate its ability into my story. I got my information from Wikipedia.

Overall, there is a lot of detail that I came across while doing my research. I think this is an important step in the story writing process. I may not use all of the information that I came across in my story. However, it gives me a far better understanding of what I am writing about.

(A photo of Ashwatthama losing his gem. Source: Wikimedia Commons)

Bibliography: Public Domain Edition Mahabharata, from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie. Source: PDE

The Narayanastra information came from Wikipedia.
The Ashwatthama information came from Wikipedia.

Thursday, March 1, 2018

Reading Notes: Mahabharata, Part D

I finished up the reading for the fourth part today. I continued to enjoy these stories and the uniqueness that they have to offer. I took notes over the sections that I liked the most. I tend to gravitate towards stories that involve battle, so that is what I did.


  • The attack on the Pandavans was very surprising to see
  • Ashwatthaman bravely marched forward to the camp
  • He was unfazed and determined to reach his goal
  • This made me think of Rama's ambush
  • The circumstances are obviously different
  • This attack in the night was vicious and driven by hate
  • I did not expect to see such an act take place
  • I think the fact that he attacked the camp at night says a lot about his state of mind
  • I think it is very cowardly to go after someone while they sleep
  • There are a lot of other ways Ashwatthaman could have attacked
  • Attacking someone while they sleep is definitely the most cowardly way
  • The interaction with Shiva was also interesting
  • I think there are a lot of cool things I could write about from this ambush
  • The actual violent scenes are not included in the writing
  • It would be fun to go into a scene like that
  • I could possibly change the events that take place
I think it would be really fun to write about the night raid ambush. I am thinking about changing how the events take place. It might be interesting to change the outcome of the night raid.


(A photo of a book and glasses. Source: Pixabay)


Bibliography: Public Domain Edition Mahabharata, from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie. Source: PDE

Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online, Part C

I continued with the reading of the third part of the online domain edition. I have continued to enjoy these stories and the creativeness they have to offer. I again took notes over the one or two stories that I liked the best.


  • I found the Pandavan exile to be much more saddening that Rama's exile
  • I think Rama maintained a sense of appreciation and hope
  • However, the Pandavan's came across as angry and bitter for what had happened
  • This is understandable
  • The loss of their kingdom and fortune is devastating
  • I think it would be cool to explore the stories not mentioned in the online edition
  • I could write about their travels and stories with the different sages in the forest
  • The promise of the return of their kingdom in due time is somewhat redeeming
  • It ensures that not all hope and drive was lost
  • The arrival of Krishna brings about a new fold in the story
  • His dialogue is lengthy and contains a lot of detail
  • He explains that his next actions to restore the kingdom are not easy
  • Draupadi does not have the patience to see her kingdom restored
  • She has anger and sadness in her voice as she longs for material possessions once more
  • Yudhishthira offers great advice and explains to her that she must forgive
  • Anger is never the answer
  • Draupadi begins the question the gods and how they could allow such travesty to occur
I think the internal conflict that the exiled group is experiencing is really important. I could write about a section of this and explore this conflict. Yudhishthira is very patient and does not jump aboard the train of sadness and hate.



(A photo of a book. Source: Flickr)

Bibliography: Public Domain Edition Mahabharata, from Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie. Source: PDE